Hello, I am doing this task in English, but I do not speak English, I would like to know if the grammar is good, and if

jonanotprick_20
jonanotprick_20:
3. Need for approval: the adolescent's ego is reinforced or satisfied when it is recognized and approved. The desire of adolescents to be the center of attraction for the opposite sex and that their abilities, intelligence and abilities must be recognized by others.

4. Necessity of freedom and independence: Adolescence is a period in which Individual strives to be independent and out of control of parents and elders. He wants the right of freedom to express his feelings, emotions and ideas. And he dislikes when he imposes restrictions

5. Need for self-expression and achievement: Every adolescent has an inherent des

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Fog Swept Glade: 3. May need commas. 4. He dislikes when they impose restrictions. ‘And‘ does not often begin a sentence. Run on sentences are oft times looked down upon. And you could make a not so validating run on by correcting that if you aren‘t very careful. 5. Number five is an incomplete sentence.Thank you for your attention. I‘m not an algebra major, so, I just gave it my best.
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Fog Swept Glade
Fog Swept Glade: Also, stimulus comes in many forms and it isn‘t always the household where the human is groomed that causes action/response.
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